Peer Blog Review 5

This week I added to Andrew’s discussion on European destruction in the Australian landscape

https://andrewgiammarco.wordpress.com/2016/03/18/differing-outlooks/comment-page-1/#comment-7

“Hi Andrew
Not only in retrospective history” this suggests that there continues to be a difference between Europeans and indigenous Australians today. Perhaps you could clarify these insights? As your finally statement argues, there is a European greed creating destruction as they purge the Australian landscape. I understand this to be your focus when you discuss ‘differences’. I believe through creating paragraphs and tidying up your initial statements this could be expressed in a stronger way.”

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