Peer review 1

https://marijasimonovska.wordpress.com/2017/03/27/it-has-been-said-about-jane-austen-that-she-is-basically-trying-to-show-her-readers-how-they-should-live-their-lives-do-you-agree-with-this-statement/comment-page-1/#comment-71

 

Hi Marija,
Good work on your blog post! A very conversational piece of writing that was particularly sensitive of your audience. Including some evidence to back up a few of your points would truly elevate your writing – for example, when you mention the opinions and attitudes of ‘critics’, definitely name-drop a few! Also maybe consider referring back to the question you posed in the title more often throughout, I felt it went a little unanswered. Overall well done and keep it up!

 

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One Reply to “Peer review 1”

  1. Hi Louisa, I can only find this one entry for 19th Century literature- a good peer review, but where is the rest of your “stuff”- and you have no category for me to find 19th Century Literature. No mark- sorry!

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