Peer Review 2

https://julenaoliva.wordpress.com/2017/03/27/19th-century-lit-blog-2/comment-page-1/#comment-44

Hi Julena,

A very emotive response! Your writing really gives me a great sense of the conflict and desperation that the speaker is feeling. I felt you had a great grasp of Emmas’ language and thought processes, however it seemed like you had almost re-written the scene between Emma and Harriet. I would love to see a new conflict and this creative piece could really be elevated by throwing in a few extra quirks and personality traits.

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